I'm making a book! (Part 2)

I'm still trying to work on my book in my spare time. It's hard because I work better in long stretches where I can get on a roll. Lunch breaks aren't always conducive to that.

Like I mentioned in my first post, I'm learning as I go here. I have the text mostly written and a good chunk of the pages sketched out.

Here's the sketch for one of the pages:

Once I have the main idea blocked out, I move to Adobe Fresco on my iPad Pro. I could probably generate perfectly polished scenes with AI but F that, bro. I want something that looks like it came out of my head, heart and hand.

I like the flat, simple look so far but maybe it needs some more texture?